Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child (ages 5 to 10)? Why?
Being helpful to others
Being honest
Being well-organized
Use specific examples and evidences to support your answer.
In my opinion, it is worthwhile to share being well-organized with a young child (ages 5 to 10). Here you can see my reasons.
Firstly, it is more likely children learn more. The children between ages of 5 to 10 start going to the preschool. Most of the teachers put children in a small group and want from them to do a simple assignment with each other. For example, teachers want from them to draw a picture. Being well-organized is a very important character in group activities. It helps children how to their duty well and on time. As a result, all of the children will learn about the assignment very well. However, being helpful persons are used to do other members duty. During the time, this manner make the other members of the group lazy and stupid.
Psychology factor is another noticeable reason. Nowadays, modern technologies such as smartphones, the Internet, computer games, and the smart television have harmful effects on children with the age of 5 to 10 life. In fact, those children spend 5 or 6 hours of their time for playing computer games which make them aggressive and disappointed persons. In this situation, the best way to keep them away from unhealthy lifestyle is to teach them how to be well-organize. Parents can give them a notepad to them and want from them to write down a daily schedule for their activities such as playing with their friends, going to the park, speaking with their families etc. Gradually, children keep away the stress and will have a healthy mind.
On the other hand, some people think sharing being honest with a child (age 5 to 10) is most costly. Mainly, children will have close friends. Being honest with friends creates a strong mutual influence between children and their friends and bring them new and valuable friends. However, I do not agree with this claim. Although being honest keep the friendship strong, the child with the age of 5 to 10 intentionally tell the truth. In this age, children do not know anything about the lie, but being well-organized can make their friendships closer. For example, they can note their friends birthday date in their daily notepad and makes them happy.
In conclusion, there are a lot of reason to prove my claim that sharing being well-organized with a child (5 to 10) is worthwhile.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...eir duty well and on time. As a result, all of the children will learn about the assignmen...
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Line 2, column 538, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'members'' or 'member's'?
Suggestion: members'; member's
...ng helpful persons are used to do other members duty. During the time, this manner make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75125628141 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66144453976 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48743718593 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6813435484 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.64 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.92 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202941221911 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687546275451 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797074988643 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153281022174 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546853667901 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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