Which would you choose: a higher pay job with long hours or an average pay job with normal work hours? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
In the turn of new century, no one can turn a blind eye to pivotal roles of jobs in people’s success. As a matter of fact, finding a great job is an evitable and crucial juncture in individual’s lives. A simple recognition of this argument leads our discussions to the questions of how people can choose an occupation and become a prosperous person. Although some people adhere to this belief that spending more time for a high-salary job has significant role in people’s success, in my vantage point it is better that individuals dedicate some their time for an average pay job. In this way, they can economize their time for doing personal activities, and also enhance their efficiency in the time of doing work.
The first aspect to point out is that what provokes people to tend doing a work with normal hours is saving time for taking apart in personal activities. It goes without saying that one of the rigors of modern hectic life is overwhelming by a lot of stress for doing jobs. Actually, in modern era, people need to dedicate some hours for watching TV, get to gathering with their family, and other their favorite activates. Consequently they can shed their stress and take a break from hectic life. Take a case of a despondent person who does not enough time for recreation, for instance. After a while, not only does he become a depression person, but also he cannot keep up his job. As a result, allocating time for doing favorite activities is significant merit of having normal work hours.
The further more subtle point is that boosting efficiency can be considered another advantage of doing an average job. It is absolutely undeniable, in the competitive worlds of today, people should have a level of capability to keep up their job and reach to a pinnacle in their job. there is no doubt that it is highly beneficial that people work in a appropriate time instead of much time and work with high concentrate. According to recent research conducted in my country, psychologists are in the conviction that people who have a higher pay job with long hours have poor concentrate in comparison with people who have or an average pay job with normal work hours. Hardly does anyone make headway in his life without focus in his job. As a consequence, a high level of concentrate is an advantage merit of a usual normal work hours.
To put everything in a nutshell, a broad look over the main points and the discussions reveals the fact that having a job with an average pay and normal hours has remarkable benefit such as economizing time for doing personal activities, enhancing efficiency in the time of doing work, and so forth. It is high time to stopped overlooking that just people who have a higher pay job with long hours can be successful.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'while', 'for instance', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269016697588 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.137291280148 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109461966605 0.0866891130778 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0352504638219 0.046263068375 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0426716141002 0.0685040099705 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139146567718 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0445269016698 0.0351676179071 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77230752335 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0222634508349 0.0309702414327 72% => OK
Particles: 0.00556586270872 0.00188951952338 295% => OK
Determiners: 0.100185528757 0.0887237588012 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0148423005566 0.0209618222197 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0111317254174 0.0139019557991 80% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2782.0 2387.08602151 117% => OK
No of words: 486.0 408.028673835 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72427983539 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.316872427984 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.203703703704 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158436213992 0.174417080927 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115226337449 0.112833075102 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77230752335 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454732510288 0.524397521467 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.5934225582 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.3 20.5533526081 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8480768911 48.84282405 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.1 120.699889404 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.5533526081 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.644075263715 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 44.6703703704 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.10344827586 1.45489161554 145% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225567586646 0.300154397459 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110639130161 0.103427244359 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0608310535241 0.0752933317313 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474789453358 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135832626803 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905133139986 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828966757182 0.0781384742642 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.443700223406 0.336927656856 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0490538361965 0.067059652881 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184055860015 0.210909579961 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813995588466 0.0618886996521 132% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.