Which would you choose: a higher pay job with long hours or an average pay job with normal work hours? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
At the turn of the new century, no one can turn a blind eye to a pivotal role of jobs in people’s success. As a matter of fact, finding a great job is an evitable and crucial juncture in individual’s lives. A simple recognition of this argument leads our discussion to the questions of how people can choose an occupation and become a prosperous person. Although some people adhere to this belief that spending more time for a high-salary job has a significant role in people’s success, in my vantage point it is better that individuals dedicate some their time for an average pay job. In this way, they can economize their time for doing personal activities, and also enhance their efficiency in the time of doing work.
The first aspect to point out is that what provokes people to do a job with normal hours is saving time for taking part in personal activities. It goes without saying that one of the rigors of modern hectic life is overwhelming by a high level of stress for doing jobs. Actually, in the modern era, people need to dedicate some hours to watch TV, get to gathering with their family, and other their favorite activates. Consequently, they can shed their stress and take a break from their hectic life. Take a case of a despondent person who does not have enough time for recreation, for instance. After a while, not only does he become a depression person, but also he cannot keep on his job. As a result, allocating time for doing favorite activities is a significant merit of having normal work hours.
The further more subtle point is that boosting efficiency can be considered another advantage of doing an average job. It is absolutely undeniable, in the competitive worlds of today, people should improve their capability to keep on their job and reach the pinnacle of their work. There is no doubt that it is highly beneficial that people perform their jobs in normal hours instead of much time and work with an exclusive concentration. According to recent research conducted in my country, psychologists are in the conviction that people who have a higher pay job with long hours have a poor concentration in comparison with people who have an average pay job with normal work hours. Hardly does anyone make headway in his life without an intense focus in his job. As a consequence, a high level of concentration is an advantage of an average pay job.
To put everything in a nutshell, a broad look at the main points and the discussions reveals the fact that having a job with an average pay and normal hours has remarkable benefit such as economizing time for doing personal activities, enhancing efficiency in the time of doing work, and so forth. It is high time to stopped overlooking that just people who have a higher pay job with long hours can be successful.
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'while', 'for instance', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261904761905 0.229887763892 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.137362637363 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10989010989 0.0866891130778 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0347985347985 0.046263068375 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.047619047619 0.0685040099705 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137362637363 0.118717715034 116% => OK
Participles: 0.040293040293 0.0351676179071 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79642519763 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.021978021978 0.0309702414327 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0018315018315 0.00188951952338 97% => OK
Determiners: 0.10989010989 0.0887237588012 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.014652014652 0.0209618222197 70% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010989010989 0.0139019557991 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2816.0 2387.08602151 118% => OK
No of words: 492.0 408.028673835 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72357723577 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317073170732 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.207317073171 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154471544715 0.174417080927 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113821138211 0.112833075102 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79642519763 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44918699187 0.524397521467 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.0439883864 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.6 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7636327238 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.8 120.699889404 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.5533526081 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.644075263715 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 45.3317073171 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.45489161554 137% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231420030544 0.300154397459 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117023522055 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0583726402607 0.0752933317313 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.475113846211 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128709028547 0.151897553556 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961796381148 0.114077575197 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829562691013 0.0781384742642 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.453038448368 0.336927656856 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.033641517561 0.067059652881 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190316319299 0.210909579961 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08539003632 0.0618886996521 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.4623655914 325% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.