Why are people addicted to dangerous sports?
There is an opinion that some people are obsessed with extreme sports and dangerous behavior. While someone is seeking for bright emotions, others are aiming for making their life more exciting and adding more risk. However, some people go in for dangerous sports and act unsafely just because they just want to have fun. I will state the reasons why I am convinced that this is true.
First, dangerous sports and behavior bring people emotions that cannot be found during the ordinary everyday life. Behavior psychologists explain that taking part in extreme sports effect the humans’ brain and influence the emotional state of people. Bright feelings that appear during skydiving and rally race impress and entertain participants, making them craving for more and more. The more one’s emotional level is growing, the more he will be addicted to this dangerous type of entertainment.
By the same token, others are looking for risk and extreme to supplement the boredom around their daily routine. People who are not fulfilled with their dull daily life often search for an additional excitement and risky joy. Norwegian scientists state that extreme sports increase the level of adrenaline in blood, and this effect makes people feel more excited and energetic. The joy of risk involves participants into going into more dangerous places and making wrong decisions.
Nonetheless, some people are just having fun and cherish life moments during extreme sports and acting unsafe. This is a certain kind of people who fail to see the difference between safe and dangerous things. Moreover, these persons loose the understanding of reality and misunderstand the gap between normal and extreme sport, safe and risky behavior. Apparently, this makes them feel fine while enjoying a dangerous leisure or hobby and while acting unsafely. Thus, people are mistakenly persuaded that extremally fast driving or parachute jumping is a normal part of a holiday.
To sum up, it appears that people are addicted to dangerous sports and behavior because they are seeking for bright emotions. While some other people want to experience extreme and risk that will make them feel alive. Nevertheless, there is a certain number of people who go in for extreme sports just for entertaining and fun.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, thus, while, kind of, to sum up, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21739130435 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55265901619 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497282608696 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.3932978114 48.9658058833 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.0 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3392961289 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113071979412 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884619780204 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213802905613 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582664628012 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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