Why Do You Think Some People Are Attracted To Dangerous Sports Or Other Dangerous Activities? Use Specific Reasons And Examples To Support Your Answer.
In this modern world, people are trying to develop the unnecessary skills that make them feel better. dangerous games like formula one race, mountain bike race, and other activities threaten people's live. I will describe the reasons and example that shows why they do that.
Firstly, many people are attracted to dangerous games because they get motivation by that game from someone or somewhere. For instance, some teenagers watch a superhero series on television, in which main character doing race with the villain. So, this scene tricks their mind, and consequently, they ended up on a racing track. some people say that what about the early times when there were no televisions? it makes sense that in early times the ratio of playing dangerous game also very low but not like anything because that time people used to watch live incident of such racings sport due to mild law in early time.
Second, many people are attracted to dangerous sports or activities because of their financial problems. Most people don’t want to risk their life but many times in life span they face some serious issue in which they need a big amount of money. many sport pay very well which is beyond the thinking of common man and that’s why dangerous sport attracts needy people. For example, when people really need lot of money they try various ways to earn money which led them to dangerous sports like mountain bike racing where their chances of survival are low but the payback is very very high.
Lastly, many people attract to dangerous games because approach toward life. like many people think that we should spend our life doing some thriller activities which made life memorable, they believe in the term that says “it is better to live a life like a tiger one day than live all life like ship’’.
To conclude, from the reasons and example I mentioned states people have various reasons to follow the path of dangerous sports which risk their precise life. it is important to learn that every people may not choose this path by their own choice, sometimes they just have to.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, really, second, so, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85474860335 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21919243886 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54469273743 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6828373318 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.625 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296150775616 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113683125818 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741932185285 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176376036509 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357194251065 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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