Today' world is the most changing world, the earth has never experienced such tremendous changing before. This tren busted by the internet. It is quite a hard question since there are many ways that the internet helps us to learn and know the things which are happening. In the following essay, I will provide the most important aspect of the internet which enhance our life.
First of all, it helps us by providing the access to all great information sites. Those site like Wikipedia and online library are the things which the last generation missed. Since those sites include all types of books and articles, we can learn more. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I remember, when I was college, once I needed an English poems collection, but I did not get any copy of that book because our local library could not find them to sell. So, I faced a lot of problems to finish my project. On the other hand, now I often read old poems written by Milton or Sekspare from the open archive website. Therefore, I think this internet helped me to read the book written on the other side of the world.
Secondly, the government service becomes quicker and smoother because of the internet. Almost all country now have their single portal; in a single platform, the citizen gets to access all information which they need. Moreover, they can monitor the application status by themselves, so whole service work so effectively. For instance, recently I have moved new apartment, and therefore I had to get permission from the government agency RAJUK. To get this I filled a form on the website, and surprisingly they gave feedback instantly. However, when I first started to live Dhaka city, the same agency took more than 10 days to clarify my file. It is all happened because the government officers do not have to worry about all the information to review the file instead they can get the original file in the internet private server. Thus, the internet is helping both the government and the general people.
In conclusion, the world technology is progressing in all sectors, and the internet pushes this process up. It is helping us by both giving the access of all type of books and papers instead and creating a smooth administrating process.
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- Integrated writing - TPO 19 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'poems'' or 'poem's'?
Suggestion: poems'; poem's
...I was college, once I needed an English poems collection, but I did not get any copy ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77551020408 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59340302986 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9656265684 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14530209801 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437892559118 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464790680196 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959436399803 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428878972444 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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