The widespread use of internet has given people access to information on a level experienced before. How does this availability of internet has influenced life in todays'world.Give examples to support your idea.

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The widespread use of internet has given people access to information on a level experienced before. How does this availability of internet has influenced life in todays'world.

Give examples to support your idea.

With the passage of time, people have been able to connect with different technological advances that are unprecedented. Among these advances, internet is one which has influenced the life of the people immeasurably. I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.

First of all, internet has made it possible to connect with the relatives, family and friends with ease, and in the most economical way. Internet has constricted the whole world into a small globe providing easy access to anyone whenever want. For example, my small brother is in the United State. He has been there since last two decades. During this time frame the situation has been changed. Before we used to call him once in the month. Moreover, per minute charge was so expensive. But now, we family members connect with him on the daily basis with the help of facebook, viber etcetera in the low cost. If internet was not there, probably we would have still faced difficulty to get in touch with the family member. This example illustrates how the internet has facilitated to the human kind.

Secondly, internet has made it possible to the swift research about the different topics. Internet has not only helped in the research process to the students and scientists, but also it has become the integral part of the technological advancement. The new devices and the product are mostly based on the functioning of the internet. For example, consider a product called ''patient monitoring system.'' This is the product nowadays many hospitals use to keep trace of their patient. They keep record of where is the patient is right now and even to find out whether the patient is punctual regarding taking medicine. This system is based on GPS (Global positioning system) whose core functioning is based on the internet. If there was no internet, this tracking system would not have been possible. This picture shows the role of the internet in the development of new technologies.

Thirdly, internet has also created the job opportunities to the people. Some course such as computer engineering are also based on the usage of internet. Not only this, people have been able to perform their business from their own home. Internet has created jobs such as online free lancing, and it has also helped on the design of new webs. This scenario shows that internet has made it possible to create jobs.

In conclusion, internet has upgraded the standard of living of the people. This is because it has helped people to connect with their relatives in the most efficient way, and it has played a significant role in the development of the new technology.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2199.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93049327354 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62200821984 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.729206395 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8275862069 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3793103448 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.88709677419 348% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222057809559 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635315428061 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514370842258 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125612910464 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187983175725 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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