Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that the satisfaction of employees depends on different factors. So many approaches have been propounded in this regard. Personally, I believe that doing similar tasks during the workday will more satisfy laborers. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, by doing one task all day along, workers can concentrate more on their duties. If workers properly focus on their duties, they will make more progress in their work. The workers are more satisfied in according to their sufficient progress. Moreover, they can find a better position in the company, and they will have more salary if they develop at tremendous speed, which can cause workers to be satisfied. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About ten years ago, I had been doing different tasks all day long; therefore, I had been making various faults in mu work due to the lack of concentration. After two years, my boss wanted me to do similar jobs in one day. Fortunately, I made fewer errors, so my boss or I was satisfied.
Second, doing various tasks in one day makes laborers more tired, and their efficiency will decline. In other words, workers must be energetic and efficient enough to help their company develops exceedingly. Hence, when the company makes adequate progress, the boss will be satisfied with his employees. The satisfaction of the boss is a crucial factor in the fulfillment of his workers. For instance, since twenty years ago, my father has been working in a structural engineering company. He says to me during these years; he always was the most energetic person in the company because he was the only person who had just similar works all along a day. Therefore, he has done his duties correctly since he was hired, so it satisfied him all these years.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that laborers are more satisfied when they have similar tasks all day long. This is because they can concentrate properly on their duties, and they are more relax and efficient.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 528, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'was'.
Suggestion: was always
...y. He says to me during these years; he always was the most energetic person in the compan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87215909091 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64560335951 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517045454545 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8399422959 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7619047619 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346111153697 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104030306011 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104784549108 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23927048479 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915844411603 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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