Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, we have different type of jobs in factories for workers. Fisrt one is a single task which you must work in a same place, then in the next one you may work in many part of the firm with various duty. Some people prefer the initial one, while personaly, I am a person who likes to spend his life in different section's of the company. I have two reasons for my viewpoint, both of which will be mentioned bellow.
To begin with, in my opinion, anybody likes to have fun time during working which helps him to not feel bored. having a lot of friends in work place is one of the most important elements for reaching to this purpos. if you want to find numerous fellows in a company, which you are working, you can not be in a same place. To sum up, having variety of task lead you to the point to work in various part of the factory which help you find more friends and this trial will take you to the point that fulfill one of the crucial aspects of a good job, not being boring.
Secondly, we all have seen and heard about uncountable prosperious individuals starting their job in a simple firm, then after few years started his own company. do you think what elements is common between these people? it is nothing except the fact that they had learn lots of things about job when they worked in previous factory. I am sure they would not be able to reach this point if they worked in a sole task job in that manufactory. I am going to examplify my father, embodiment of successful a person in my life. working as a simple worker in general motores, he always changed his position to learn different aspects of the company's activity. By doing so, in a short time, he became an expert in that field, so he established his own company not exactly like general motors since it needs a huge money, but he started his firm with 5 workers.
To make the long story short, according to the aforementioned arguments I believe when we work as a simple worker in a company we need two significant thing. First of all we can help ourselves to build joyful environment with finding good fellows in that particular job. secondly, the most thing we learn about aspects of our job, the much oppurtunity we will have to start our company in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun part seems to be countable; consider using: 'many parts'.
Suggestion: many parts
...e, then in the next one you may work in many part of the firm with various duty. Some peo...
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Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...king which helps him to not feel bored. having a lot of friends in work place is one o...
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Line 4, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...t elements for reaching to this purpos. if you want to find numerous fellows in a ...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Do
...fter few years started his own company. do you think what elements is common betwe...
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Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...lements is common between these people? it is nothing except the fact that they ha...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...s nothing except the fact that they had learn lots of things about job when they work...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...s nothing except the fact that they had learn lots of things about job when they work...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 524, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Working
...ment of successful a person in my life. working as a simple worker in general motores, ...
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Line 10, column 152, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'thing' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'things'.
Suggestion: things
...er in a company we need two significant thing. First of all we can help ourselves to ...
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Line 10, column 272, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...ng good fellows in that particular job. secondly, the most thing we learn about aspects ...
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Line 10, column 387, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...unity we will have to start our company in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, in fact, in general, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40287769784 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38904532545 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52278177458 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6458284725 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149856838418 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049936465764 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391872754892 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880853405199 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364652490456 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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