From my point of view, it is more satisfied for workers to have different kind of responsibilities than doing the same things again and again because focusing on different task is more beneficial to them and it is enjoyable.
To start with, employees can benefit more by doing different tasks in a work day. In a regular working day, people do the same things in a regular basis and that causes the workflow to become a routine for them. However, when the workflow has different kind of tasks, it makes employees more motivated to work. It is a fact that people can be more creative when they faced with various situations. To me, for example, being a specialist in pharmaceutical company motives me to go work eagerly since it is always challenging solving different problems about a product. There is always something to work on in that kind of work environments. A recent study conducted in a university hospital has revealed that 95 percent of employees prefer to have different responsibilities instead of repeating same tasks daily.
Another point to consider is that being able to do varied responsibilities is more enjoyable. For many people in work life, enjoyment is as important as getting paid and learning process is a part of enjoyment in work life. Employees tend to learn more about to broaden their knowledge in their field and while improving themselves they are likely to look for different kind of responsibilities. A company, for instance, provides training for its employees in an all included five-star hotel. This opportunity gives employees to relax and learn more at the same time. Besides, after training in a relaxing environment, company has new responsibilities to these trained employees. Maybe it is difficult to believe but all new trained employees have enjoyed being responsible for new tasks, and every employee in the company wants to get that training.
To sum up, for the two reasons discussed above, having various task in a day is beneficial and enjoyable to workers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, may, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02380952381 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03054531924 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7550848863 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.533333333 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293204263143 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991821439395 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628849276881 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17915766381 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674026784167 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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