You are helping to select a leader for a student organization or club. Do you agree or disagree that a person’s honesty is the most important thing to consider in deciding whom to vote for? Use reasons and examples to support your position.

In today's fast-paced and money-oriented world, honesty plays a vital role in making progress in a company and in life ethics. Throughout the history, honesty helps people triumph over obstacles and achieves success. A controversial question regarding this issue is whether a leader that are supposed to opt for a company or an organization must be an honesty person or otherwise. Some people believe that honesty in life as well as at work is the most momentous factor to flourish, whereas others disagree. I am of the opinion that; the more a person is honest at work and in life, the more leads to prosper and make progress in terms of any aspect of life and business for some reasons. In ensuing lines, I will address the most discernible reasons.

The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, being honesty in a person life or at work brings about getting well and also making progress. In fact, when a person who is going to choose as a leader in a foundation such as student organization be an honest man, everyone in the organization has a pure respect for him and this causes progressing. Take a personal experience as an example, when I was in university, the university was going to select a person for our leader. There was a person who was reputation as honest person, so everybody voted him and in the end up, he was selected. Consequently, for his reputation, everyone listened to his word and following him, thus after a while, we had seen a substantial progressive in our organization. As you can see, honesty, can induce people to follow their leader and as a result leads to successful.

Another noteworthy aspect that should be reflected in this explanation is that an honest leader who would accept advice from people around himself or herself, leads to prosper. Needless to say, every success leader in the world must get advice from other who has a good experience at a work to get well and triumph, and also if the leader refused the advice, he/she would convict to failure. To illustrate this, I would like mentioning a result of study in my country conducted indicated that, a leader who listen to people around himself/herself, would be succeeded in small time than who refuse other advices. As a result, a good leader must listen to other as advice and help each other to blossom.

In light of these crucial reasons, I have strictly come to believe that, honesty causes to be friendly with other employee or employer. Given the above, honestly not only is the most factor for choose a leader for every foundation, but also leads to bring a two-sided respect between individuals in a company toward better performance. That is why I believe that for opting a person as a leader, our significant factor must be honesty.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, honestly, if, regarding, so, thus, well, whereas, while, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2282.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75416666667 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77627598292 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483333333333 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1642738716 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.105263158 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2631578947 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186374117928 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636472104591 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412016790144 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119904058281 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483088409028 0.0645574589148 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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