You are helping to select a leader for a student organization or a group. Do you think a person’s honesty is the most important characteristic for being a leader?
There is no shortage of debate about what is the best characteristic of best leader through out history. Although many believe honestly is one of the crucial characteristic of good leader, I, on the other hand believe good leader most have other features than honestly. I will address the most discernible reasons why I feel this way in the following.
To begin with, life is challenging these days, and we face many unexpected events in our life. Group also will face many hard situations during their activities, because of other competitors. Thus, leader rule is very significant to help group figure out how to deal with these hard events, and professional leader can help group to fulfill their goal. In better word, professinalisim is one of the important characteristic of team leader. For instance, I have been working in computer company for two years. My first manager was very young and he has graduated from decent university, but he was not master in computer programming, there for he did not notice minor error in his employee works. Therefore, our antivirus product did not sell well in market, due to the fact that it’s crashed because of that minor error. Consequently, our CEO decided lead our antivirus team by himself. He is very experienced and professional in his job, In other word, he is one of the best computer programmer in my country, The result was amazing, he immediately noticed many minor error coding and he replaced our C++ language with Java. After a while we gained our customers loyalty again and our antivirus became one of the top sell computer software in Iran.
Moreover, almost all adults all around the world spend most of their time in their work place, hence their workplace envoironment plays racial role in their productivity. Kind and supportive leader help employee to build good job atmosphere, because they can interact with their leader without fear. Therefore, being kind not only help employee to hire their idea its their boss freely, but it improve their productivity. My own experience is a good example of this. I had a part time job in advertising company when I was a university student. Our leader was very experienced but he implemented very restrict rules, and he liked formal relation between employees and leader. However, our company did well, but after a while he replaced with Joe, my best boss ever. He was very kind and always asked other employee to say their idea about our works. After a while we treated with him like our friend and our sells increased , because everyone talks about his/her idea in our team and some of them was unique.
In conclusion, it is for all the aforementioned reasons, I firmly believe professionalism and being kind is the most important characteristic of a good leader. This is because it improves productivity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: of the best
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Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
... the best characteristic of best leader through out history. Although many believe honestly...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...t only help employee to hire their idea its their boss freely, but it improve their...
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Message: Did you mean 'improves'?
Suggestion: improves
...heir idea its their boss freely, but it improve their productivity. My own experience i...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... like our friend and our sells increased , because everyone talks about his/her id...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, honestly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2352.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93081761006 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80419958317 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496855345912 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 739.8 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1813691749 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29166666667 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173725380437 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573569230644 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702467107372 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143163677987 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539511679003 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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