YOU ARE PLANNING TO STUDY ABROAD. WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU WILL LIKE OR DISLIKE ABROAD? GIVE SPECIFIC REASONS AND EXAMPLES TO SUPPORT YOUR VIEW.
Studying is one of the significant parts of life. Which place a vital role in the development of a person. Selection of place to study will depend on many aspects. Studying abroad may make an individual more productive and also increases the status of that particular person's status in society. Apart from status, there are many advantages accompanied with studying abroad which are detailed in successive paragraphs.
When I step out to study abroad, I will be exposed to strange people with different culture and tradition. This exposure ensures the individual with development in dealing with unusual circumstances fosters in the sharpening of social and behavioural skills. For example, in western countries, they have the tradition of a hug so as to welcome an individual, but in the native country which will not be a similar case. This situation complement with the enhancement of proficiency in human management skills.
Further, the new environment makes a person more independent in taking decisions. While studying abroad I will be alone, so that I am forced to conclude the aspect on my own. Assuming that I am in the college hostel and suffering from severe cold and cough, at this point of time decision to consult a doctor should be made by myself. This type of consequence complement the judging skill of the individual. Judging the severity of the situation and acting accordingly is important in certain walks of life, which will nurture the man in different ways.
studying abroad will enhance contacts and also friendships. Moreover, it ensures me to gain knowledge of the history of that particular country. By knowing the history makes my mind broader and broader in thinking, also nurturing intellectually. Knowing the other culture makes me a more versatile person so that it promotes me to work in different parts of the world and facilitate even more enhancement of knowledge.
By the end studying abroad have more advantages than studying in the homeland. Hence I personally like to study abroad
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s one of the significant parts of life. Which place a vital role in the development o...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...increases the status of that particular persons status in society. Apart from status, t...
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Line 1, column 419, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are detailed in successive paragraphs. When I step out to study abroad, I will ...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...tries, they have the tradition of a hug so as to welcome an individual, but in the nativ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Studying
... nurture the man in different ways. studying abroad will enhance contacts and also f...
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Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...vantages than studying in the homeland. Hence I personally like to study abroad
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, while, apart from, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12951807229 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92208263372 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0855023668 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.15 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142935256885 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546685185696 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065292386639 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981780379502 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595890788139 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s one of the significant parts of life. Which place a vital role in the development o...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...increases the status of that particular persons status in society. Apart from status, t...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 419, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are detailed in successive paragraphs. When I step out to study abroad, I will ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...tries, they have the tradition of a hug so as to welcome an individual, but in the nativ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Studying
... nurture the man in different ways. studying abroad will enhance contacts and also f...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...vantages than studying in the homeland. Hence I personally like to study abroad
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, while, apart from, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12951807229 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92208263372 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527108433735 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0855023668 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.15 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142935256885 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546685185696 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065292386639 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981780379502 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595890788139 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.