It is better for people to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, instead of staying in their home communities for their whole lives.
In the present world it is inevitable to move out of their hometowns when they become adults. Nowadays, if we want to achieve something, we must grab the opportunities wherever it is available.
It is common in the present world moving from one place to another in the search of jobs. Jobs is the most decisive part of the individual status. As an responsible individual he or she should go and work where the company is presently located and thus build a good career . For example, the working unit of Tata powers is in gurgao, if I want to pursue my job in that prestigious concern certainly I want to go to the paper where it is situated. Hence, I should leave my hometown for my career advancement.
Furthermore, some individuals are interested in pursuing the graduate education in the several prestigious educational institutes around the globe. Now to gain the knowledge and also to fulfill his dream he should go to the place where the institute is situated and start working. For example, I myself had an ambition to pursue my master's in USA because of the way they train the students was the main attraction. My hometown in Bangalore, but I want to leave my hometown to chase the dream.
I agree to the statement made on adults to leave hometown, as because it will improve individual intellectual ability and also social behaviour to deal with strangers
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 150, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...isive part of the individual status. As an responsible individual he or she should...
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Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tly located and thus build a good career . For example, the working unit of Tata p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71966527197 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82153179437 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577405857741 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4265948224 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155564427666 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594929324702 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974667202452 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09906015134 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710471270721 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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