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some people believe that schools with the same-age are better, while others think that schools with girls, and boys are more effective? which approach do you prefer

Schools, the place where the young buds are exposed to the world for the first time in their life. As we know this green planet consists of both male and female category of humans. So in the future days these young chops will grow and be the assets to the country, henceforth school is the first step where the children should be trained and make the compatible to deal with this coed nature of the world Primarily this coed behaviour is the nature's law. If this law is violated then their will be imbalance in many of the aspects.

Firstly, this imbalance may reflect on mutual understanding of both the genders. This is one of the major problem that has had been encountered during ancient times where both genders are seperately trained. But in today's world it is not the case, in the past only male individuals are assigned to work outside the house and female are confined to household works. Irrespective of gender work culture is all are allowed to work under same roof, so if both are trained coedly from childhood it will not be the problem.

Furthermore, These humans are well understood each other's pros and cons. There won't be gender discrimination. For example, in the past times makes are dominative in the house and they used to act like a supremo of each and every aspect, on the other hand female are only enticed to work inside the threshold boundary eventhough they are capable of managing the many of the situation that are encountered in daily life. Therefore coed culture will ensues the reduction in gender discrimination.

Now with the widespread of this coed culture ensures the shy attitude towards the each gender. Hence they can deal with one another comfortably in all the situation with same focus. So that there will be less distraction, more productivity will be there in the proposed work. If the coed culture is not filled the individual will undergo strenuously embarrassed due to this Anderson of opposite gender.

In the end, by underlying the above instances I personally believe that schools with girls and boys i.e,coed had more effective and advantageous than any of the other curriculum.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 443, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'natures'' or 'nature's'?
Suggestion: natures'; nature's
...ld Primarily this coed behaviour is the natures law. If this law is violated then their...
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Line 1, column 456, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...this coed behaviour is the natures law. If this law is violated then their will be...
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Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ion that are encountered in daily life. Therefore coed culture will ensues the reduction ...
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Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'ensue'
Suggestion: ensue
...daily life. Therefore coed culture will ensues the reduction in gender discrimination....
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e shy attitude towards the each gender. Hence they can deal with one another comforta...
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Line 7, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ity will be there in the proposed work. If the coed culture is not filled the indi...
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Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , coed
...eve that schools with girls and boys i.e,coed had more effective and advantageous tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83651226158 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60489038109 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520435967302 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2126774109 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.411764706 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119395168874 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039659689503 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747944958012 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096516037145 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105925151185 0.0645574589148 164% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments