Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Initially, the desires will be less expensive when compared to adulthood. At a young age the attraction towards chocolates, pastries, toys etc. are more, these attributes make no burden to the parents, But it will be the ultimate goal for the young people. If any sorts of discrepancy in purchasing that can be managed by the parents and particular aspect will be a lesson for life. So that the youngster will not encounter a similar problem in the future walks of life, which may tax more amount in future. Hence financial management in the purchase of toys will definitely help the person in the future while purchasing the amenities.
Secondly, the process with planning will always end with distinctive and huge taxation to the financial, economical and social status of the individual. Therefore, planning should be part of life, because it portraits the present situation and also fosters the limitation to aspiration. For example, at a young age if you wish to have a pencil which price exceeds the money you has, at this point in time your parents shall bare the excessive amount. In the future, the wishes Will also grow accordingly, the henceforth monetary aspect will also complement it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion: parted
...dividual. Therefore, planning should be part of life, because it portraits the prese...
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Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...encil which price exceeds the money you has, at this point in time your parents sha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 43.0788530466 23% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 1977.66487455 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 201.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97014925373 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73332264775 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5089459644 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.9 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114278755323 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444224458591 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504438725945 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092781389573 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303837103662 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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