Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school.
Do you think this is a good idea?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
reward for work is the general untold rule that has been followed from past in this world. people mind tuned to such an aspect so the they will be expecting some sort of gratification for their work. reward may include giving money, or buying things to the one from whom people take help. I personally disagree to this money giving aspect does not suitable for encouraging children to earn more grade in their academics.
money is not the most primary need for children. If the parent do so they themself are excavating the future of the child. at some point of time in school when children enters to the teen age, they are more curious to some unethical attribute. money can distract the children and make them to indulge in other unhealthy activities like addiction to drugs , smoking, alcoholic etc.
I personally not prefer to give money to children for their higher grades in school. Instead I will research their requirements and offer them that they will be fulfilled with that attractive requirements of they score a good grade in school. requirements may include bicycle, video games etc.
Furthermore, fulfilling the needs will not give the satisfaction sometimes. At this point of time parent should know the desire of the child like going to fantasy park, foreign trips etc. and offer them that those desires will be fulfilled only with their good academic grades.
Therefore, giving the money for the higher grades will not be suitable type of encouragement for the children in school and also it won't help the healthy growth of child.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51287889516 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7467024814 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293552350476 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102060209075 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724745327827 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169608593684 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578115907106 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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