It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay
Country an emotional and pride aspect of an every individual. In the country, even if it is a developed one we cannot find all the places in it as city. As because city is such a place where large number of people come and settle for their distinct benefits. But in the countryside it is not the case, as it comprises only their native races. Based on the population, industrial estates, educational institutions etc. Many things constitutes to call a city as big city or cosmopolitan city or metropolitan city and so on. There are some keen benifits in the cities which are elaborately justified in successive paragraphs.
The future of the country is quantified based on the young population in it. Therefore, the young folks should be trained to the global competitiveness. This criteria will be fulfilled by the institutions which are mostly located in these cities. Good quality of education to meet the international standards is only possible in the cities because of the people from different parts of the world will be there in these cities. So attainment of these knowledge are easily accessible in these region.
Secondly, as cities congregate many individuals from different parts of the world (for different reasons). The residents,young buds of these cities have more opportunity to mingle with the other citizens from different corner of the globe. Henceforth the opportunities are hell lot than the people's who are secluded from the cities. Here this type of culture will evolve the normal human as an urbane. The crushes in the activities will get polished.
Furthermore, as city is one big roof under which many people will leave, it also imparts competitive characteristics to their beings. As large people with hierarchically in the economic status will lead life, this promote and prompt the people to strive hard to raise their status in the society. Meanwhile reduces the arrogancy, egotistic nature and create the awareness of their status and rank in the society.
Eventhough countryside children will be rugged , much active in co-curricular activities, good health but these sorts of aspect may not help the individuals in their career development hardly their might be countable number who succeeded.By underlying these some of the aspect as basis to my stand, I personally disagree to the growth of children in the countryside is better than in big cities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11224489796 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97139794663 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520408163265 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4435896284 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4285714286 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139803468015 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342217990214 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467492147098 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810244776534 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622921571846 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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