Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Life kick starts with making decisions. In routine life, from the dawn to dusk an individual make actions and works according to respective personal decisions. This decisioning transit to a tedious and responsible in some major aspects, so that it may cause permanent hazard to the future or also it can foster the future with success. In any paramount situations it is better to conform with set of individuals and consensually come out with plausible decisions, the major drawbacks of making the decisions alone in important situation are enumerated in successive paragraphs.
Primarily, decision taken by a single person for the important situation can be considered as the outcome from the single point of view. Though the decision maker is capable of glancing the situation from different angles but as a human it is not possible to brief the situation overall from all views. Henceforth the major decisions are more viable with the collective outcome. For example, in any country to take a detrimental decisions, the government will form a committee to cease major upheavals.
Furthermore, biasing probability is more when the decision is focused on an single entity. Therefore decisions should be unbiased, acceptable and majorly should be sheer apt to that particular situation. This can be more possible with accrete decisions. We can take this coronavirus pandemic outbreak as an example to this situation, meticulously planned decisions are taken by many country around the globe to deprive the intensity of the pandemic and also offsetting the inflating economies by congregating the taskforce to take the viable decision.
On the other hand apart from right decisions also their is a greater risk and burden in the alone decisions making. As because if a single person is cope uping the situation implies that every single outcome of that particular situation is responsibled by that single entity only. Industry with large workforce can be taken as an elicit example for this situation, if only the owner takes the decision of the salary or any other aspect of that industry then the owner is responsible for all the pros and cons of that decision. Hence burden is more.
By accreting the stands which I personally posed in the previous paragraphs, collective decisions by conformation of the individuals is more liable and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, apart from, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20052770449 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88774195745 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496042216359 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.6562747191 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.941176471 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2941176471 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179317097616 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636611801489 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364137811147 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104547389847 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347097721454 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.