Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Realm has many nations with a different culture and distinct source of entertainment. Nowadays this unique culture and recreation are hindered by the various invention that took place in the early twentieth century. In the early twenties, Earth witnessed the innovation of movies and television. In the evolution stage of these technologies, entertainment was extremely well defined and fostered the livelihood to society. But in recent years this quality is deteriorating and it is negatively impacting the young minds. I agree that today's movies and television are impacting inimically on young minds.
Today these movies are not conveying the useful messages to the young buds rather it is adversely affecting the social behaviour of the youths. For example, some cinema may have anti-social bites in it, as according to the natures rule young minds percepts and keenly provoked to this instance. Due to the ill effect, these individuals try to imitate the situation which was in the cinema in the realtime factor. By the end, this cinema has encouraged the promotion of a hostile environment in the society.
Furthermore, if we take the example of a romantic movie with a beautiful love story. It ignites the hidden premature desire in young minds. As a result, it promotes undesirable relationships in this premature stage. Some may cross the thresholds and suffer from pregnancy in the premature ages. Therefore naturally the young clan get distracted from their studies as well. Henceforth this entertaining aspect is fostering the unwanted developments in the society also affecting the future of the budding individual.
Finally, this television is making people more lethargic. As irrespective of age, stick in front of it for a long duration may affect the people adversely with respect to their health.from the recent study profuse watching of television majorly affect the retina of eyes. In the children, this prolonged watching of television increases the risk of migraine headache.
By noticing the facts that are laid in the previous paragraphs, I personally agree to the statement posed that today's so-called entertaining centre is facilitating the negative effect on the young minds than the positive one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34943181818 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95671767831 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559659090909 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4009636462 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.15 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194834812232 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052593467729 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534917979859 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107409217536 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442944823904 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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