People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer
Work is one of the paramount aspects of humans life. Every single person will work unique towards there presumed goals. Here goals are nothing but expectations to their work. As the above statement suggests that these set of people will only expect money for their labour. Accordingly, other sets will expect something apart from money, which has been expressed in the successive passage.
Firstly, a considerable proportion of the human race in this realm works for distinct passions. Passion depends on the mindsets of the particular individual, and also it is different from one another. Basically, passion will be the preemptive force for a substantial amount of members belong to this category. I can give you an example of my maternal cousin at this point in time, to be frank, he is an electronics and communication engineer he got a job in a well-known company but his passion was to be an entrepreneur so he rejected his job offer and focused on his startup, hence this is his passion. Ultimately he is working for his passion, not for money.
Secondly, all the people will not work only to get a hefty amount of packages. Moreover, they work for their growth in social status. These set of people's are stable when it comes to economic matters. If we take the Royal families or business tycoons they work for the social stability in the society. Henceforth their work is only for the wellness of people around them, in turn, fostering the development of social status. Therefore here work is for philanthropy.
Furthermore, there are other clans of people who only work for power. This set endeavour
Is to acquire a good position in the community. This good position is nothing but enjoying the facilities to which the government will offer for their work. For example, an individual will dream to be a governor of the state, he dreamt it only to serve the people but also to experience the power which complements with it.
We can conclude that not every people will only work for money to lead life. By underlying the above information I conclude that different people work for different purposes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85595567867 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69674668088 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515235457064 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0979687426 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6818181818 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4090909091 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201389053333 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817060587277 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469605138873 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131907543797 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569427341085 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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