Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your
In this realm entertainment is one the basic need for the people. This entertaining field and their workers(entertainers) will acquire zenith importance in society. Their views will be more impactful to the youngsters. Though it not so determinedly impacts on older individuals because of the reasons explained in successive paragraphs.
Firstly, old people burdened, their mind will be under pressure to lead a family. This confines their entertainment activities to an optimal level so that they hardly visit such occasions. But in the case of younger individuals, a substantial part of them was not likely encountering the risks of the families. Hence, determinant part of the budding population will follow the famous entertainers, musicians, actors, athletes etc., by incorporating their opinions to own life. Therefore the prominent set of individuals are following these framed icons which ensure that the opinion is more important for younger than adults.
Secondly, the influence of icons from a different genre's in society has a critical impact on the young folks. Because youngsters will be unaware of future consequences and preemptive ability to figure out the impact of the opinions made by icons, due to less experience in life. For example, in the film, Hero in his keen perspective he quotes that "love marriage is the better option in life ", these folks blindly follows his words name their life miserable. This shows that opinions are important for younger.
Finally, due to past experiences, older people will be relatively cautious to percept their opinions. Also the area capable to judge the present situation and likely the abide by it. Henceforth older people are not much influenced and hardly incorporate fair activities into their life. But this is not the case of young individuals.
I personally agree that the opinions made by famous musicians, actors, entertainers, athletes etc., paramount words to some individuals of younger generations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40967741935 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04739017664 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577419354839 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0175227997 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1666666667 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201065522992 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612934633639 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474508946476 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114388336809 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483624298181 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.