In today’s complicated and interconnected world, making better decisions seems a challenging and difficult issue people face with. Some people believe that an individual has to decide vital decisions by himself or herself because he or she is aware of his or her situation better than others. I, personally, on the other hand, think that we should get help from others when it comes to deciding an important one for our lives. I feel this way for two significant reasons which I will mention in the following paragraphs.
First of all, by getting help from others we can make good and well-prepared decisions regarding crucial issues we have not faced before. We, humans, live together in a shared community. Therefore, if we want a better results in the future and in the long run, we have to make sure that we are aided by others surrounding us. Otherwise, deciding alone about critical problems we face in our life span, can be intricate giving rise to worse results. My personal example is a good illustration of this concept. When I wanted to choose my field of study in university, I decided to consult with my uncle which was a professor at public college. Accordingly, he helped me by his diverse points of views and some important points regarding how to opt for better major field which I was not aware of. This example shows how it is important not to make critical decisions alone by ourselves. Had I not consulted by him, I could have chosen a wrong path leading to unknown results in the years to come.
Last but not least, we as humans don’t know everything about different problems life can bring on. Actually, every person has a knowledge about certain subjects while he or she doesn’t have any clue about other kinds of things. As a result, to be successful in the end, we need to take advantage of other people’s knowledge and information. For instance, once upon a time, I wanted to participate in a university Olympiad contest I knew nothing about. Consequently, I went to my cousin home which she had taken it before. She showed me the way it worked and I took her advices seriously which resulted in my success in that important field. If I hadn’t taken advantage of her experience, I could have failed the test. Thus, this also demonstrates we have to use other individuals’ knowledge when we want to decide about a vital situation in life.
To put it all in a nutshell, taking all the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I am of opinion that making critical decisions in our lives need some help from others and cannot be done by ourselves alone. Not only do we need other people’s help, but also we have shortages in some areas requiring us to get aid from individuals around us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
...s don’t know everything about different problems life can bring on. Actually, every pers...
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Line 3, column 848, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...decide about a vital situation in life. To put it all in a nutshell, taking all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, but, consequently, first, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 480.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70625 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76237666266 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8186463358 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2173913043 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8695652174 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69565217391 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123633573078 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399286992184 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473168801908 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852233304015 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422242484451 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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