In today's complicated and interconnected world, selecting and finding a great occupation plays a vital role in individuals' success in the following years to come. Some people believe that it was a lot easier in the past to choose a prosperous job. I personally, on the other hand, think that it is much easier now than before. I feel this way because of two significant reasons which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all, today we have wider access to internet and social media helping us gain more knowledge. By reading information on websites and also on social media, we have more opportunity than before to explore and detect individuals who are successful in their career. As a result, we can learn from them and act accordingly to pursue a secure and beneficial career. But, reaching this extensive information on the World Wide Web was very difficult in the past given rise to difficulty in opting for profitable job in the future. For instance, my father mentions that in the old days, they had no technological devices to get such huge amount of knowledge as soon and wider as today. Therefore, they had less possibility to become involved in opportunities leading to great jobs in the years to come. Had they accessed so much useful information on the net, they could have conveniently selected a promising occupation for themselves. This example shows how much it has become convenient for a lot of people to choose a better job now.
Last but not least, nowadays people are more aware and alert than before. Because each generation evolves as time goes by, people are smarter than the past. My personal case is a good illustration of this concept. Once I got a scholarship from university, I had more chances to consult with those students studying my future field of study. They aided me a lot providing significant awareness on how much market will want this major in the coming years, how I can participate in a variety of events resulting in a prosperous job to opt for after graduation. If they hadn't equipped with so much awareness, I would not have been able to think about a successful career I have now. Hence, today's smart individuals has helped a lot in identifying great jobs than the past.
To put it all in a nutshell, putting the aforementioned reasons and examples into consideration, I strongly believe that today we detect more prosperous occupations easier than before. Not only do we have access to more knowledge nowadays, but also we can get aid by genius persons evolved in each generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 675, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e amount of knowledge as soon and wider as today. Therefore, they had less possibi...
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Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...ob to opt for after graduation. If they hadnt equipped with so much awareness, I woul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, as to, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8132118451 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86425976434 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533029612756 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1393830051 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.619047619 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9047619048 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139009051147 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432248661063 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349176117651 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894136524239 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324856688232 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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