Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A person should never make an important decision alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples
Some people thing that important decisions should be made alone and without taking other's opinion on the topic, probably because getting a difference of opinion will confuse them and will lead them to take a wrong decision. However, I disagree with this stance for the following three reasons.
First of all, involving more people in a decision making process is really beneficial and helps in many ways possible. For example, when my brother cleared high school, he had the biggest question of his life lying in front of him. Which stream should he select?. He was very sure that he wanted to pursue engineering as a career, but he want to know a bit more about it. After talking, to a lot of friends, family members, teachers, and seniors he started getting confused about his decision. After a long discussions with everyone again he finally set his mind and decided to become a chartered accountant, which he is very successful at right now. This is a perfect example of getting expert advice while taking any decisions. If he would have taken the decision alone he would have probably taken engineering which really wasn't his strong suit, which he realized after all the discussions.
Second of all, getting other's opinion gives you a sense of clarity about your decision. For example, while taking any decision that has two options you should usually write the pros and cons of both of them, but that is not enough you need to understand both the options in depth according to your needs because something that might have worked out for someone else won't necessarily work out for you. Any decision you take should be highly based on your comfortable and your lifestyle and not someone else. However, sometimes taking a decision that your friends or family members have taken can help you but that can happen once in a blue moon and you can't base all your decision on them. Understanding and being sure about the decision you are taking is very vital.
Finally, while taking a decision you should not be influenced by the benefits of a certain decision. For example, if you are uncertain of what to decide between two options you shouldn't decide them using some impractical means. Just because your one decision will get you to a position you will get paid a lot doesn't mean that it is the safest option or the best option for you. Considering all the possibility before finalizing on a decision is necessary.
In conclusion, because taking a decision alone can result in some undesired results, it is my contention that decisions should never be taken alone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...should be made alone and without taking others opinion on the topic, probably because ...
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Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... pursue engineering as a career, but he want to know a bit more about it. After talk...
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Line 2, column 507, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'discussion'?
Suggestion: discussion
...nfused about his decision. After a long discussions with everyone again he finally set his ...
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Line 2, column 736, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had taken'?
Suggestion: had taken
...dvice while taking any decisions. If he would have taken the decision alone he would have probab...
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Line 2, column 826, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...probably taken engineering which really wasnt his strong suit, which he realized afte...
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Line 3, column 653, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... can happen once in a blue moon and you cant base all your decision on them. Underst...
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Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
... what to decide between two options you shouldnt decide them using some impractical mean...
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Line 4, column 310, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...u to a position you will get paid a lot doesnt mean that it is the safest option or th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, really, second, so, while, after all, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2126.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79909706546 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48596998721 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501128668172 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4156229795 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.3 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.15 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199700007488 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672529668392 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451420526052 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116526012291 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426715286969 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.