Do you agree or disagree to remain happy and optimistic in the failure than to achieve success
In this chaotic world, most of the things will go on in its way. Nobody has the control over the present happening, except the almighty. When the life goes in the unexpected path, we will encounter success and failures. These success and failures depends on individual expectations, also their state of mind. In percepting the present aspect the people are categorised in two different ways namely optimist and pessimist.
Firstly, failures are compulsory part of the life through which every individual must experience. For example, one boy admired and loved a girl who is arrogant, bossy and also unurbane but he was not successful in proposing her for his love. He failed in his relationship . He thought that yes if she would have accepted his proposal though he will be happy now but when we see this on long term he may encounter many problems in civil sense and so on. So by the end he was happy for what has happened by being optimistic.
Furthermore, failure may impart the bitterness to your soul right now In present situation but meticulously if we self introspect, failure will complemt us with care and beautiful future. I may quote my present situation as an example which perfectly suits to this situation. As I have prepared to study abroad took exams to meet the criteria of the universities but I was awarded with less marks in one of the examination. So I planned to retake that particular exam to get qualify for the University requirements. Meanwhile I encountered the sudden upheaval of the novel coronavirus pandemic all round the globe. Most of the countries banned international plane by enforsing lockdown in their respective countries. Here I should be happy so that I am out of danger then optimistically I should prepare for next intake.
Failure teaches us lesson , alert the mind and mostly it point out what rank do we secure in this society meanwhile helpful in self introspect ourselves. Whereas, success will in arrogancy, develops illusory mindset and also provoke mind to dream more than to be in present. Although, failure may leads to detrimental hope also chaotic mind and success will congregate energy and happyness it is also an important aspect in life.
Therefore I personally agree to remain happy and optimistic in failure situation than to achieve success by keenly outlining the pros and cons in the above examples
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82752331405 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2487728859 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0952380952 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61904761905 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209557869294 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551675825848 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887478044787 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151086352654 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137554621986 0.0645574589148 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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