Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Technology, a boon to earth when it's usage is in the limit. If it surpasses definitely it is a curse to the human race. Technological advancements make the community well informed to the ongoing aspects of the present world. on the other hand, it also connects the purple around the realm, this may have some unfavourable impacts on the young clan. When we compare the advantages and disadvantages, drawbacks outweighs the benefits. Hence some ill effects of technology are discussed below.
In the past, our ancestors are very much active and creative when compared to this era. In the Indian classics, we can find the verses, which contains the information that was hard to retain in mind. These verses facilitate the ease of remembering the hardest and trickiest matter into a simplified form. Hence every word in this has a particular meaning or inference to the hardships of remembrance. For example, what is the distance between the moon and the earth? , Probably to get the answer we have to go through tedious calculations. In Indian classic's, we are having the verse which perfectly suggests an answer to the posed question. But in today's world, these types of skills are on the edge of extinction due to technological development. Youngsters are day by day becoming more lethargic to form the solution in this genre and also even they are tortious to remember it.
Furthermore, the advent of technology, says the internet, encompasses a substantial amount of population to its usage. Youngsters find out the major fraction so that these innovations attract them in many ways. Hence they will dwell with gadgets which are the part of innovative technology. It retards the development of certain skills, in future at some point they encounter major backlog to there further development. Also, it entails its arms on the health of individuals.
Today's young population are very much fond of these social media like Facebook, Instagram etc., though these technologies may Foster the old friendships and also it can affect in detrimentally. For example, anybody around the globe can contact any person to whom to which they want to. Therefore young population take advantage of it and utilize this finest innovation for there relationships aspect. Also, these innovations are encouraging premature connections, ending up with the disastrous future because of distraction.
By briefing out many instances above, I personally concede that technology is making children with deprived skill sets and also less creative when compared to the past
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17675544794 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93482932708 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581113801453 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8836980889 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.52 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.52 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992402219468 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0247384809654 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356158453823 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661872795476 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501574408831 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.