Online shopping has been beneficial in many societies
In the ancient times, to buy certain product substitutively we have to lend certain amount of product that is plentiful, this system of shopping was called barter system. Gradually, after the invention and usage of currencies, these currencies were used to buy the product then slowly this barter system acquired it's place in the history. In the modern world after the advent of the technologies this shopping aspect invoked through online. Shopping the products through online has many pros and cons, but optimistically we can say it has benefited the mankind in different ways, which are discussed in subsequent paragraphs.
Primarily, in this busy life nobody in this world are having the patience to go and purchase the commodities which are needed. So they rely on the online shopping. In this streneous work culture the people are not having their own time to purchase there essentials. During this apathetic situation online shopping has been a very good path way to buy products.
Secondly, this online shopping sites had profoundly generated a direct relationship between producers and consumers. In the purchasing, agents were used to play a perplexy role and were chief factor to increase in the price of product. Majorly price of product we used to be very expensive due to this agent activity. Henceforth, predominant decrease in the prices we can ensure with this type of culture.
Furthermore, in the previous day's people used to select the particular product which fulfill their requirement by the explanation and feedback given by the storekeeper. In this era of technology, through online shopping we can find the feedback of the product from its users. As we know, feedback from the users has more weitage than others. Therefore, this online shopping has also helping the customers in selection of the product as well.
Although some of the disadvantages like defective products delivery, irrelavent delivery, delay in delivery time etc. But these disadvantages outweighs the advantages.In the end, by constituting the benefits of online shopping I personally feel that online shopping is the best way to purchase the goods because of the above mentioned aspects
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24788732394 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8420371503 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538028169014 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4618276995 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199341441741 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722698397713 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747508346435 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121055173306 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474099732173 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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