You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose.
Frankly, if I want to travel from my home to a place 40 miles away, there are three different kinds of transportation available: riding a bicycle, driving a car and taking a train. From my point of view, each option has its own advantages and disadvantages. But I find myself more inclined to choose bicycle. In the following paragraphs, I will try to explain my position more clearly.
First and foremost, riding bicycle is the best kind of physical exercise. Although it may be boring and difficult, I would like to ride bicycle because it has positive effects on my overall health. In addition, it is the most affordable kind of transportation. In my opinion, it is a good alternative to car and bus because it does not produce harmful gas such as carbon dioxide and methane and help us protect the environment. Besides, I will go to remote areas or rural regions by my bicycle but I cannot drive car or take train to go to these regions.
In the second place, driving car has countless disadvantages. For example, the rate of high way accidents, fatalities and injuries is high. In comparison, bicycle is usually safe. Furthermore, I should pay for additional costs like gasoline, parking, etc. Taking train has its own difficulties. For example, in my country, most trains are overcrowded and train stations are very far from the city. Additionally, I cannot choose my favorite time to take train because its schedule is not flexible.
Taking all the aforementioned arguments into account, it can be concluded that there are different kinds of transportation for traveling from home to a place 64 kilo meters away. But I prefer to choose bicycle because it has many benefits for not only my health, but also the environment. It has also other advantages which I outlined above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bicycle'
Suggestion: to bicycle
...t I find myself more inclined to choose bicycle. In the following paragraphs, I will tr...
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Line 2, column 531, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...le but I cannot drive car or take train to go to these regions. In the second place,...
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Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bicycle'
Suggestion: to bicycle
...ilo meters away. But I prefer to choose bicycle because it has many benefits for not on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, frankly, furthermore, if, may, second, so, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8431372549 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96810475939 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2167762645 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128522030519 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377724904293 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732723377462 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940857768489 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695101856454 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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