You need to travel from your home to a place 64 kilometers away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose.
Some people consider to have a 64 kilometer trip by means of bus, whereas others prefer taking a tip with a car. Even there are some people whose interest is traveling by airplane. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss advantages and disadvantages of the after mentioned choices completely, if the time allows.
Firstly, traveling to such a distant places is better by your own car because the trip will be faster and comfortable. In fact, by driving a personal car, one could arrive to that place early which merely will take 1 hour to pass 64 kilometer, while other transportation such as using bus will take more time because individuals should wait for a while until a bus comes that mostly depends on traffic congestion at a road and then they will be able to get on. Additionally, people will be comfortable, if they intend to come back to their home late at night, whereas the bus most of time during at night is not available. They can easily park their car and take a rest and then continue to drive. Therefore, using a personal vehicle is good one because people travel faster and comfortable.
However, there is another way to travel which is by airplane. In fact, although airplane is faster than other transportation system, it is much expensive. Individuals will be able to travel ten-fold of this distance at the same time of traveling with bus or even cars. For example, in my last trip to a city of Tehran from Tabriz, it only last up to one hour to arrive there, while in my return to city of Tabriz by means of bus, the amount of time was eight hours, which is wasting a substantial amount of time. However, buying a ticket for an airplane is costly. As I mentioned before paying transportation expense with traveling by bus cost 15 dollars but with traveling by airplane the costs is at minimum 50 dollars. Given disadvantage of being expensive, one should be cautious whether it is worth to pay such a money or not.
In conclusion, according to above-mentioned things I would say that having a trip by a car is faster and convenient than traveling by bus. However, taking a journey with airplane is fastest kind of transportation with the disadvantages of being high-priced. I prefer to travel with using my own car rather than airplane for the sake of spending lower amount of money for this travel. If someone wants to take a 64-kilometer journey, s/he should evaluates the both way of transportation including a personal vehicle and an airplane well in order to choose the best one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
Suggestion: place
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Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
...hich merely will take 1 hour to pass 64 kilometer, while other transportation such as usi...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lasts'?
Suggestion: lasts
...o a city of Tehran from Tabriz, it only last up to one hour to arrive there, while i...
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Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the fastest'.
Suggestion: is the fastest
...However, taking a journey with airplane is fastest kind of transportation with the disadva...
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Line 4, column 446, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'evaluate'
Suggestion: evaluate
...ake a 64-kilometer journey, s/he should evaluates the both way of transportation includin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68397291196 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81905612525 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483069977427 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5684410267 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.210526316 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3157894737 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156251025865 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556650974021 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394967577649 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100724238152 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259784110028 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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