Young adults prefer mostly to spend time with friends. However, there are some who prefer to spend time with their families. Which one do you prefer? Use specific details to support your idea.
Spending time with family members or friends is an issue which almost related to several factors such as personality, family member's familiarity, the purpose of spending time, etc. Although it would be better to spend our time equally with both of them, personally, I prefer to have more time with my friends rather that my family for three reasons.
First, I can choose my friends but family members are something obligatory. All of have friends whose are similar to us in many perspectives. We have a lot of common interests with our friends which can share with them. To illustrate, I am movie lover and like to be friend with persons that like movies too. But in my family, my sister believes that watching to movies in time-consuming and my father is very busy to spend his time on entertainment and my mother prefer to watch Modern Family series and Entertainment Tonight! So, as I am spend a lot of my free time on cinemas, I have to be my friends instead of my family. To sum up, I think I don't have many common interests with my family members.
Second, I am a kind of person that like to have information about many things. So, I prefer to have communication with people whom are specialist in a certain field. For instance, I have a friends that studied neurology, computer science, sociology, economics, physics, and pharmacy. So, since my family members have limited knowledge, I have to spend most of my time with people that can discuss with them about these fields. In contrast, when I want to talk about marketing and literature, my family is the best place to spend time.
Last but not least, spending time with my friends is funnier than spending time with my family. Indeed, the generation gap between my parents and me is a big problem. They are old and prefer to be in calm places and they doctor avoided them from exciting hobbies. Actually, I hate quiet place and I need to be in busy and noisy areas. But, I like to go hiking, rock metal concerts, drift rallies and other exciting events. So, I think it is better to not bring my family members to such places because those are dangerous for them.
In conclusion, spending time with my friends have a lot of advantages for me. I can learn, share my ideas with them and have fun. But, I don't say that we should completely cut our relationship with our family. Even, I believe that we must care about their life too. But it doesn't mean that we should always stick to them. In fact, we can fill this gap in some ways. For example, we can cook, listen to their diaries, and tell each other funny stories.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... and Entertainment Tonight! So, as I am spend a lot of my free time on cinemas, I hav...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...tead of my family. To sum up, I think I dont have many common interests with my fami...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a friend' or simply 'friends'?
Suggestion: a friend; friends
...n a certain field. For instance, I have a friends that studied neurology, computer scienc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...family is the best place to spend time. Last but not least, spending time with m...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...my ideas with them and have fun. But, I dont say that we should completely cut our r...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... must care about their life too. But it doesnt mean that we should always stick to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2123.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5460385439 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51876204626 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464668094218 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2139089994 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6538461538 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9615384615 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231242749717 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718299845638 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783550236675 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167795095844 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572651989792 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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