Young People enjoy life more than old people. Do you agree or not?
life if full of joy and sorrow. Everyone at some point of time must face the difficulties of life. In such a case, the young minds falter when compared to older people because older generations have gained adequate knowledge and experience about various perspectives of life. Hence, I disagree to the fact that youngsters enjoy life more than older people do.
Firstly, elders have lived their life and have gone through the struggles in the form of academics, choosing a career and a life partner. but as one ages, their life track gets steady and it will move in a monotonous way. However, the life of young people is not the same. they must tackle the difficulties of managing time during studies without distractions and get away from the dilemma of the career path that they intend to choose.
Furthermore, adults have no tension regarding financial matters. but teenagers and youngsters nowadays rely on their parents for money as they don’t go for jobs until they get one of their passion. Also, the elders could have bigger children who might take care of their own life whereas newly married couples with small children have a tough time to adjust to themselves and find that raising a child is a herculean task.
Moreover, young people are addicted to the advancement in the field of science and technology which enables to spend quality time on gadgets and neglect their health. Therefore, they suffer from health issues from a young age. This is not true in the case of old people as they could have led a life in the natural environment not prone to diseases related to technological devices.
To put it in a nutshell, it can be reiterated that even though young minds are full of energy and vigor, certain situations make him to lead a stressful life filled with chaos and commotion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...just to themselves and find that raising a child is a herculean task. Moreov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84294871795 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52672882665 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8192586139 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.733333333 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234969698292 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902305854241 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09936128996 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126287242042 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881343629446 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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