In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
Universe, by itself, imitates everything around us. From time immemorial, human beings are on the run of making life simpler by their innovative ideas and craze for inventing new things. this has led to the significant contribution, not only in the field of science and technology, but also in the field of arts and literature. In such endeavors, past achievement plays a significant role which generates fresh ideas and room for discoveries. this type of influence could be best cited from the old testament of the biblical verse where God created men as a mirror image of himself. It could be taken as an example to prove that traces of already existing models are extended to create new objects and hence the given argument could be agreed upon.
History of mankind had always been influenced by mother nature. For example, Wright brothers invented the airplane model after looking at the birds flying high in the air. The idea of wings used in flight paved way for motivation behind aircrafts which is very beneficial to all even today. Similarly, Albert Einstein, the great scientist and physicists, found the theory of relativity from the basic developments relating to the different aspects of physics. nature provides abundant solutions to the existing problems of man.
Furthermore, every research activity is continued, either by extending known facts or disproving the already existing theory. hence, a base or foundation forms the crux of the advanced theory which is prevalent and widely used in modern tools. For instance, Benjamin Franklin experimented with electricity and was interested in lightning. In 1772, he was the first to show that a thunderstorm lets out electricity. many sources of electricity which we use today are due to the above-mentioned fact.
Nevertheless, there are few discoveries which was made accidentally and by chance. For instance, the benzene ring structure came in the dream of Friedrich August Kekulé. Moreover, Alexander Fleming, inadvertently discovered penicillin, when he found the growth of the mold eating away the bacteria. such evidences prove that contributions need not be influenced by past achievements.
Thus, to conclude, we can reiterate the fact that, any new discovery has its foundation in past events. any idea creeping in the mind of an individual is a very rare case which could occur accidently. In the recent years, many technological advancements only try to improve the already existing prototypes rather than bringing about a new model completely unimaginable to the human mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29095354523 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96966488001 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633251833741 0.4932671777 128% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3582812926 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.0869565217 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7826086957 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13043478261 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153959266699 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366579267064 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557831769269 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699921689471 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638232880969 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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