No field of study can advance significantly unless it incorporates knowledge and experience from outside that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The given argument could be accepted since with the advent of computers and internet, technological advancement has reached the zenith. there were times when man lived in caves and hunted for food as a mundane activity. moreover, the gurukul system of education was followed, where sages taught the values of life rather than the equations and formulae that the contemporary kids are exposed to. History of mankind witnessed simple and unique inventions like electricity and telephone which required the knowledge of a single field. As more discoveries were made, scientists and researchers amalgamated ideas from different fields to make an advancement heeding to the needs of the people.
For instance, in olden days, myriad number of people died due to diseases which had no cure at those times. Initially, medicines were found to be the panacea and the death rates started decreasing. Also, doctors started to operate a person in case of emergencies. Pregnancy and childbirth became fearless among the women due to the progress in the field of medicine. Similarly, the field of medicine incorporated the use of artificial intelligence where robots were created to aid in surgery. A step further in this development is the conducting of operations from another place with the help of video conferencing.
moreover, field of science and technology, if combined effectively could yield diverse results. For example, mathematics has a wide application in other branches such as physics, chemistry and computer science. A mathematical model together with the programming knowledge could yield the desired outcome in a fraction of seconds. The great scientists like Albert Einstein and Isaac Newton, albeit physicists, had major discoveries in mathematics to their credit. Even though the famous finding of gravity is a physical phenomenon, it plays a crucial role in the field of mathematics which has led to innumerable findings.
Nevertheless, there are many fields which may not collaborate with other fields in the most significant way. The best examples could be the profession of a musician, singer, dancer and an artist. They have a unique role to play in their field of expertise. A painter or a sculptor may not require technological beneficiaries apart from a paint or a brush or a clay. To advance in these fields only require the prop required by them and not an amalgamation of field or ideas from a spectrum of sources.
Thus, to conclude, I would highlight the point that educational institutions have included inter disciplinary courses as it is the need of the hour. only by having a wide intellect in many fields could one be able to recover the hidden treasures of nature. further progress is possible only by means of a collective insight into many aspects of what nature has to provide to us in abundance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, similarly, so, thus, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2386.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18695652174 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96854651825 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1882313899 60.3974514979 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.4166666667 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04166666667 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211992418376 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532902484661 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531239150569 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10978007668 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052209387317 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 100.480337079 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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