tpo 6
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
History of mankind reveals that with the advent of technologies, man has learnt to lead a comfortable life. conveniences come at his doorstep or knock at the door in the form of online bookings and online shopping. Hence, I concur with the fact that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. this statement can be proved by means of the following details and examples.
Firstly, advancement in the field of science and technology has resulted in products which saves time. For instance, in earlier times, people had to stand in long queues to book either for movies or to travel to a different destination. With the advent of android mobile phone and online mode of payment, this task has become easier and not a time consuming one. Also, shopping of various food products or clothes can be done using the features available in the phone. Therefore, the time saved by means of this can be utilized efficiently for other purposes.
Secondly, with the invention of different modes of transport, commuting from one place to another has become a lot easier and more convenient. For example, in olden days, humans relied only on bullock cart or cycles which is time consuming. Moreover, it is advantageous for a group of individuals. Nevertheless, contemporary kids enjoy the benefits of travelling by rail and air which is equally enthusiastic and can accommodate a larger group of men and women.
thus, to conclude, the above-mentioned facts can be summed up that nowadays, there is no need to wait for any kind of need. Every type of service is rendered in a fraction of a second. thus, life is easier and peaceful to live and relish compared to the older generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Conveniences
... has learnt to lead a comfortable life. conveniences come at his doorstep or knock at the do...
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Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...as when our grandparents were children. this statement can be proved by means of the...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...e a larger group of men and women. thus, to conclude, the above-mentioned facts...
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Line 13, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
... is rendered in a fraction of a second. thus, life is easier and peaceful to live an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90784982935 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85609864052 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600682593857 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.969780009 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.875 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185622204441 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589535419209 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123393168577 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113967589453 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133434443156 0.0645574589148 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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