Sports stars and movie stars have an obligation to behave as role models for the young people who look up to them.in return for the millions of dollars that they are paid we should expect them to fulfill this societal responsibility.
sports stars and movie stars have an obligation to behave as role models for the young people who look up to them. In return for the millions of dollars that they are paid, we should expect them to fulfill this societal responsibility. sports and movies are two completely different professions which a person chooses out of his own interest and skills. One can witness a true sportsman spirit out of a sports star who always tries to win for his nation. On the other hand, movie stars are acting according to the demands of the story the movie is trying to meet. both are professionals with a major difference.
A sportsman plays without expecting the benefit out of it. However, a movie star acts purely for the income to earn his living. In such a situation, it is not correct to expect them to fulfill their societal responsibility. it depends solely on the interest of an individual. A sports star rising into fame could use the opportunity to discuss his fans about the responsibilities of human beings. The famous cricketer Dwayne Bravo visited a reputed engineering college in Chennai recently. Since he is admired by many and has a huge fan followers, any kind of suggestions from his end could surely have instilled in the young minds the well-being of the society.
Thus, a sports star could act as a role model for the young people who look up to them. this cannot be expected out of a movie star. An actor or an actress is expected to adhere to the norms and conditions laid down by the director. they should become suitable for any kind of role the story expects. To make both ends meet, movie stars often sign for any kind of role that come along their way. Nevertheless, most of them are money minded and expect their movies to be superiors which in turn makes them to choose roles which the audience may like. if a hero or heroine chooses only scripts that is written for the well-being of the society, then their movies will surely be flops and their names unknown to all.
But there are many movie stars who are brand ambassadors of products. Similarly, there are a few who run live TV shows. Further, some of them have opened charitable trusts to give food and educate the poor and needy. These types of stars do act as a role models for the budding youngsters.
To conclude, we can be sure that sportsman plays for fame whereas a movie star acts for money and fame. if this fame is used by them to change the mindset of youngsters and make them socially responsible, then it could lead to the betterment of the country in turn for the universe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, still, then, thus, well, whereas, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 463.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57235421166 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52299622244 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496760259179 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2757198447 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4230769231 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8076923077 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.567800938764 0.243740707755 233% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155139776866 0.0831039109588 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163505419053 0.0758088955206 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320699989508 0.150359130593 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15679829009 0.0667264976115 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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