Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
only when people face difficulties in life, they think of finding a solution. man depleted most of the natural resources for his selfish requirements. As years passed by, he started to realise that whatever he had done for his own benefit is bringing about changes which could result in the end of human race. The given issue is one such example and the remedy suggested is to pass laws so that any remaining wilderness could be preserved.
In the olden days, men lived in caves. Jungle was his home, animals and birds were his friends and the plants and trees provided him with the required food. However, as years passed, he began to think and his need arose. he cut down the trees and transformed the agricultural lands and forests to build homes, industries and make the wilderness a mere tourist destination. Technological improvements were made and humans depleted the natural sources for his economic gain. As a result of which, the flora and fauna has become extinct.
natural calamities are nowadays very common. There are great changes witnessed with respect to the monsoon. Ozone layer depletion is taking place. Glaciers and ice over the Arctic region have started melting. Humidity percentages are rising and the heat is soaring day by day. alarming situation has arisen and man thinks that it is time for him to wake up to these tremendous changes happening in the nature. so he has started the reversal process. To bring back the situation to normal, he is trying to ban the usage of things which are very much-needed by mother nature. Best example could be the following: ban of plastic usage, planting of more trees, usage of less papers by digitization, etc.
Even then, many people don't adhere to the emergency protocol. In such cases, it becomes a necessity to pass laws and make the people abide by it. Citizens should be made aware of the current scenario. If this is done, then the remaining wilderness could be preserved for posterity. At this alarming situation, man should forget about the economic gain, since, being alive is more important than personal gains.
Thus, in conclusion, I would like to reiterate the fact that for normal living in this world, flora and fauna are very important and it is the duty of mankind to preserve it not only for his own benefit, but for the survival of all creatures on earth. this is possible only by the stringent measures undertaken by the government of every nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, thus, in conclusion, as a result, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82816229117 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54597453211 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570405727924 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5986207597 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8076923077 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1153846154 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96153846154 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211831600238 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494232952566 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567114358793 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11834877291 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532883597104 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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