Young people enjoy life more than older people

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Young people enjoy life more than older people

Life is full of surprise, someone enjoy and another one sad, depressed. There are many factors determine the happiness such as, money, age, adaptive mind and desire. Adulthood is the best time to feel the vivacity of life more than older-some would agree, others would not. In my view, the best moment in everyone life is young age that is proportionate to enjoyment and I think in that way for the following two important reason.

The main reason is that young have lots of physical strength that drives them to take adventurous works. In humans life young time is the potent period when, you have physical strength and unbounded mind to explore. The best works in the history of humankind laid in young age. For example, when I was a little boy, often time we heard story from our grandparents. One day, my grandfather told a story about their young age. He said, when he was young he with his four friends where going to a secluded place to practice black magic. And then, a gene had come and they left the place as early as possible. By hearing those scary story I often went goose bump. As you can see that, although my story were scary but it was not possible in old age because the age is not support those whimsical behaviors.

Another reason is that young age comparatively disease free than older age. Being healthy goads someone to do extra thing such as, culinary works, going for hike, cinema and also long trip. Those activities is full of life. For instance, when, I was a graduate student, we were went movie theatres most of the holiday with friends also went for long trip during university vacation. Now, I am a manager of a company, I have not enough time also wishes to go for cinemas, trip like that before. As you can see that, after certain age of our life especially after adulthood we are going to constrict within ourselves and also we have not enough mental and physical strength to do adventurous activities.

To wrap up, some would argue, age is not a determiner your enjoyment but in reality the ironic truth we should have acknowledged that our enjoyment varies with our age. It is not only, due to loss of body strength but also lack of passion like that young time. So, we should enjoy our life during young in order to make a colorful past.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
Life is full of surprise, someone enjoy and another one sad, depressed. There a...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...ma and also long trip. Those activities is full of life. For instance, when, I was...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56447688564 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3606516017 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518248175182 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.491933897 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2727272727 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6818181818 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176301476617 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582890972612 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591142716877 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127464677085 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626040819167 0.0645574589148 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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