Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Some people may agree to this statement by explaining how much enjoyful their childhood was and some may disagree with the statement that young people are always on the control of older one, so have limited freedom, consequently enjoy less. As far as I concerned, i agee with the statemnet. At young ages, people are less burdened with responsilibity and get love form everyone. They do not have to face the complexities of the world.
In the first place, young people enjoy much more than older ones do because they got love form everyone around them. Perhaps, there might be nobody in this world who hates the young people. They are innocent and lovely. For instance, my litthle brother who is just about 10 years old, is the person who has got the most love in our family. Because everyone loves him, he has got privilage to do whatever he wants. Anyone, who goes for shoping, my little brother's stuffs are probably going to be on that shopping list. Also, amost everyone, who comes to home, bring chocolate to him. That is why, i think he is enjoying his life much than i do.
In the same place, young people are provided with less or no burden of resposibility. In other words, they are carefree. My same brother has no obligations to do any works on houses like clenaing rooms, making foods for all of the family members et cetera. He has no oboligations of getting job to help family financially. To conclude, he has no works to done besides his some school homeworks which is really interesting about childhood. This is what makes their life more enjoyful.
Furthermore, nobody gets engaged on complicated realtions every man has to bear and internet based social networks at young age. The recent researches have shown that, social sites and unnecsessary relations can augument personal hardships a man goes through. For example, my brother is happy with within family members and does not care for anyone else. He also is not involved to online social sites like facebok or instagram. That is what, I think, makes him more happy person.
To sum up, I agree with the statement that young people enjoy life more than older people do. This is because of carefree privilages, love and support from every member of family and not getting involved on those activities that can balloon personal tensions. This is why; I believe, older people also can live their lifestyle with fun by adapting their lifestyle as young people have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in other words, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78250591017 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47656893554 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529550827423 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2065607638 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8076923077 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2692307692 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386675264241 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101329115517 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164157259724 0.0737576698707 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228917256869 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145202789226 0.0645574589148 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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