Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
People have different views about which group enjoys their lives more, the young or old people? While some ague that the old people are more likely to enjoy their lives for some reasons such as more wisdom, I believe that the young people enjoy more because they are healthier, they have less responsibilities, and they have not tolerated loss of their dear ones.
One of the primary causes is that, roughly speaking, young people are healthier than older people. Usually older people afflict several kinds of illnesses, and all of their organs are suffering a multitude of pains. My grand mother in her last years of life, had two eye surgeries, and at last, afflicted dementia which was a very annoying malady. She got lost a couple of times, in fact. Because young people are healthier, they can be more active. They can exercise regularly, or they can participate in parties and dance. To a typical old person, movement is difficult, hence, they are usually reluctant to participate in such programs.
Another aspect to postulate is that elderly people have more obligations in their lives. One field that older people carry responsiblity in it is their family. Usually an old person serves either as a mother or as a father for several children. They should ruminate and devise plans about the youngster's future, and if their offsprings are not independent yet, they should fulfill their current requirements e.g. the expenses of university, housing, renting a car, and so on. Another realm that the older people carry its onerous duty is career. Commonly, any parent possesses a vocation, and he/she should be accountable with respect to both his/her boss and clients. All of these considerations get an old person to tolerate more stresses. A typical old person is always preoccupied with thoughts about his work, and the consternation precludes merriment.
What is more, older people usually have lost some of their dears. Inevitably, as someone lives more, he would be more likely to lose his relatives like parents. This is a unique lament for a person to lose his/her parents. The main reason is that all of us are accustomed to our parents, and have been with them from the very beginning. By getting old, a person will experience losses of a lot of his dear ones, and gradually, he becomes more and more depressed.
In conclusion, although some may argue that the elderly people are more delighted in their lives, I, personally, postulate that the young people are more ebullient since they enjoy a healthier life, less duties, and less lack of loved people.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93548387097 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60406179753 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513824884793 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8571018493 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1304347826 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8695652174 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13043478261 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376152093998 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117000651962 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122418866901 0.0737576698707 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241432942452 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830438785296 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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