Young people enjoy life more than older people do
Whenever it comes to the issue that whether young generation feel happy with their life or older one, there are never short of discussions and arguments. Although, Youngers feel happiness more than older because they are energetic and vivacity, as far as I am concerned, I would still prefer that older person feel more joyful in their life. Even though there is hundreds of reason behind my preference, I would only explore some of them here.
First of my reasoning would be that I see lot of example of young people that when they fails something which is they tried all their best; they think that it is their end of life. Conversely, old people feel blessed about what they done in the past, they feel more proud themselves. For example, in many successful people who retired always say that learning from mistake is the best way to study in life which showing that they are failed and also feel fortune with what they accomplish with.
Secondly, we all know that many people spend most of their lifetime working and also I never heard someone who feels sunniness working all time. This means old people especially after they retired they stay more bliss because there they do not have to work all day. They usually spend most time with their family or their grandchildren which makes them happier with their life. Such as grandchildren means they have already done what they should do.
Lastly, old people means they are aged almost eighty percent of their life. By giving the statement, I am trying to say that they already deal with they are going to leave the earth soon which means they will spend most time more happily because they knew that they have only few years left to stay happy. This example can be sounds unappealing yet it’s the universal truth of elders life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are hundreds'?
Suggestion: there are hundreds
... more joyful in their life. Even though there is hundreds of reason behind my preference, I would...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'fail'
Suggestion: fail
... example of young people that when they fails something which is they tried all their...
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Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'did'?
Suggestion: did
...old people feel blessed about what they done in the past, they feel more proud thems...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l time. This means old people especially after they retired they stay more bliss ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70700636943 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1667381824 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531847133758 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9959761694 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.692307692 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21416392457 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917564233961 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593040397202 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143922765365 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362026240204 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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