Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Do you agree or disagree?
I believe that young people enjoy life just as much as older people do. While young people are generally more energetic and active than older people are, it does not mean that older people do not enjoy themselves as much as young people do. I feel this way for two important reasons.
First of all, enjoyment can mean different things to different people and we cannot compare them with each other. For example, young people may feel that to enjoy means to spend time with their friends or to play video games. Older people may enjoy themselves by spending time with their grandchildren or other family members. Even older people have their own circle of friends and they generally like to meet up often when they are free to catch up on old times. Moreover, since older people are more experienced and know more about life, they generally have more topics to talk about. Hence, we cannot say that young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Secondly, older people are financially independent and they can buy whatever they want. They do not have to ask anybody for money or permission to buy what they want. But, young people need to depend on their parents for everything and they are generally not financially independent. They also have other commitments. For instance, many young people attend college and they are generally inundated with academic work, assignments or projects. So, they have to manage everything well. Therefore, we cannot say that only young people enjoy their life more.
In conclusion, I believe that both, young and older people can enjoy life equally and we cannot judge about who enjoys more. It totally depends on the individual and how he/she looks at life. Age does not stop anyone from enjoying their life.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.178041543027 0.229887763892 77% => OK
Verbs: 0.172106824926 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.124629080119 0.0866891130778 144% => OK
Adverbs: 0.100890207715 0.046263068375 218% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0860534124629 0.0685040099705 126% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0979228486647 0.118717715034 82% => OK
Participles: 0.00890207715134 0.0351676179071 25% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.28785197656 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0326409495549 0.0309702414327 105% => OK
Particles: 0.00593471810089 0.00188951952338 314% => OK
Determiners: 0.0148367952522 0.0887237588012 17% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.026706231454 0.0209618222197 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0148367952522 0.0139019557991 107% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1757.0 2387.08602151 74% => OK
No of words: 300.0 408.028673835 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85666666667 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.29 0.338922669872 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.163333333333 0.251872472559 65% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.126666666667 0.174417080927 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103333333333 0.112833075102 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28785197656 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.402031725 59.2087087015 82% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.7894736842 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9275201427 48.84282405 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4736842105 120.699889404 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 32.1228070175 45.7405998639 70% => OK
Elegance: 0.793388429752 1.45489161554 55% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412872716531 0.300154397459 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142427509952 0.103427244359 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.147740328573 0.0752933317313 196% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.504207960581 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163730408635 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159551709908 0.114077575197 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156730714702 0.0781384742642 201% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.342121240664 0.336927656856 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.129113013934 0.067059652881 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300842382228 0.210909579961 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119586016348 0.0618886996521 193% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.