Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Do you agree or disagree?
Unlike what it seems, inside an elderly person is an energetic spirit. That is why I disagreed with the statement above: "Young people enjoy life than older people do". There are different aspects that we the younger generation don't recognize in an old man or woman. As their life almost at the end, they care more about life. In this essay, I will give my points to prove the idea.
Firstly, they would not waste their time and try to treasure their life at every moment of their life. At this moment, to enjoy the last remaining years, most of them are being more active and energetic. After retirement, old people have more free time than younger ones. As a result, many of them decide to go hiking or choose light activities such as planting trees or walking. For example, unlike me staying at home most of the time doing homework, my grandmother usually goes jogging or takes some dancing courses with her friends. From that, you can see that she has a healthier lifestyle than myself.
Additionally, elders don't like wasting time and being more responsible for every decision. Due to their limitations, it is hard for them to achieve their dreams. However, for this reason, the senior citizen has a wiser use of time. As most of them have been through many situations and gain experiences, they schedule their time more wisely. They want every work they do must be done effectively and the result should be worthy. While young people are wasting their time on unhealthy or meaningless activities, elders tend to prefer activities that benefit for themselves.
Last and not least, this is when old people would appreciate the time with family and their closest companion. Even though they are no longer able to achieve all the dreams they set before, their biggest dream is to enjoy the last years with their family.
In conclusion, older people are enjoying their life than younger do. Although the younger generation more active and do enjoy their life, they can hardly understand the importance of life and don't have spare time to achieve their dreams. On the other hand, elders are free to do anything and treasure every moment of their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80697050938 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3698518766 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536193029491 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2001006568 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9545454545 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86363636364 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299343158958 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100412459327 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139142079208 0.0737576698707 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196903877273 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115465370558 0.0645574589148 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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