Young people enjoy life more than older people do. Do you agree or disagree?
It goes without saying that enjoyment and happiness are inseparable blocks of the human lives’ building. Regardless of age and sex, all people strive for greater pleasure in life, and in this regard, a controversial debate among them has raised whether youngers are more joyful or elder. Personally speaking, I believe that younger people enjoy life more than older people and the facts and reasons to substantiate my notion are elaborated upon hereunder.
Firstly, young people have higher stamina and motivation to adventure and go on trips. It is crystal clear that going on a journey and do adventures make people happier and cause the secretion of dopamine, oxytocin and serotonin hormones –angles’ cocktail- which is responsible for happiness in human’s brain. As people grow older, their physical ability to take striving actions lessens so that they gradually lose the chance of secretion of these hormones. Thus, the feeling of happiness resulted from doing adventurous activities will be reduced.
Secondly, older adults are not inclined to create new bonds and connections compared to younger people. Making friends and establishing new relations lead to the unique experience of social and private skills which will result in a more excellent feeling of enjoyment. In this regard, when people start a new relationship or partnership; in fact, they are finding a new environment to live. They have the chance of making love with new people, discuss about new topics, learn many diverse issues and communicate with different types of individuals which all of them give them the sense of excitement and happiness. Since older people incline to save their older relationships and friends, they have less opportunity to make new ones, and then enjoy less compared to younger people.
Finally, the physical situation and healthiness are the key factors in enjoyment of life. Since older people usually have severe health problems, they suffer from different types of pains and anxieties so that they do not enjoy their life as before and are always nagging over their situation. In contrast, younger people have healthy bodies and are not limited by their physical conditions have the freedom to take part in different activities without the need to be anxious about their pills and tablets and healthcare issues.
In sum, I believe that young people enjoy more than older people due to the fact that they have a higher chance of doing adventures, making new relationships and have healthier bodies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, in contrast, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2896039604 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7334836562 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529702970297 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4107735881 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5625 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333248862526 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117001921497 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971338568394 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220607884572 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912737292901 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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