I agree with the idea that young people enjoy life more than older people do. I feels this way for two main reasons. First, the longer time they have. Second, the healthier body. In the following essay, I will explain this issue further.
The first reason that I believe young people enjoy life more than older people do is the longer life. Young people have the period of their lifes longer than the old people. They have several years to spend much more fun in their life, and they can enjoy their life with their friends in highschool or university. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in highschool, I had a great time with my lovely friend everyweek. We play a lot of sports together such as Basketball, Volleyball, Badminton, and so on. At that time, we can shuffle the sport whatever we like and we really have enjoyable lives. For this reason, I strongly believe that it is worthwhile to having fun when we are in the young age.
The second reason that I believe young people have a fun life more than older people is the stronger body. Generally, young human body is more healthy than the old body. Human growth has the maximum strong at the age of teens, and has the minimum when we are growing older. My grandfather personal history is proof of this. Few months ago, my family and I went to England. We have plentiful activities to do in the trip. Unfortunately, at the time when we arrived in London, the weather is really cold. Because of the weather like that, my grandfather can not go anywhere but stay at home. As a result, only my sister and I can go outside and have fun in the trip. Accordingly, I think that young people have an enjoyable life more than older people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...enjoy life more than older people do. I feels this way for two main reasons. First, t...
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Line 3, column 684, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
...rongly believe that it is worthwhile to having fun when we are in the young age. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, really, second, so, while, i feel, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46349206349 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35806138909 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7904421068 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.1304347826 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6956521739 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04347826087 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38246738449 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123584752585 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.208687165575 0.0737576698707 283% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316703815533 0.150856017488 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414367521263 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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