Your friend wants to lose weight. What advice would you give to your friend and why?
In today's world, people judge a person's character or personality, on his/her fitness to some extent. Everyone wants to get fit and healthy nowadays as people are easily bullied by body shaming. Now, if my friend wants to lose weight, though I am not a fitness freak, I would suggest him two basic fundamentals: a diet plan and regular excercise. In my opinion, these two things are the best bet and a person can rely on them inorder to lose weight.
Firsltly, I would suggest him to exercise or perform yoga daily. A famous author once said " Regular excercise is one of the most effective ways to cope with stress". Think of obesity as a stress, so to vindicate this one has to excersise daily. Other than this, I would adivse him to engage in household needs and some kind of a sport. In my view, engaging in homely activites can be a good ploy as it will not only make his job easier, but the sweat he burns doing this will burnout a lot of calories leading to his weight reduction. Nowadays, many people participate in extra-curricular activites or some kind of a sport to keep them busy and keep their fitness on point in the process. In my opinion, if he engages in cricket, football or any other sport, it will boost his activity and vanish the laziness: the biggest culprit of causing weight gain.
Furthermore, devising a perfect diet plan can be an effective way to reduce weight. He can hire a nutritionist so that he eats a healthy diet and stays away from all the junk, that leads to obesity.In this way, a balanced diet will enable him to get all the indespensible nutrients needed for him to get back in shape. I have witnessed this in my own life. My mother always used to struggle with losing weight. She tried so many different kinds of diets throughout her life. They were always focused on denying her one of thefood groups, such as breads and grains, but never specially addressed over-processed food consumption. Finally, she went to a nutritionist who advised her to just eat natural and organic food in the proper proportions. My mom lost thirty pounds in eight weeks after that. Therefore, I would first advise my friend that the best way to lose weight is to have a healthy, balanced diet.
Therefore, to conclude these are the two main suggestions I would make to my friend to help him lose weight. First, I would advise him to start eating a well-balanced, all-natural diet, and, second, I would tell him to get some form of exercise every day.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
In todays world, people judge a persons character or personality, on his/her fi...
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Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'fundamentals'.
Suggestion: fundamentals
... fitness freak, I would suggest him two basic fundamentals: a diet plan and regular excercise. In ...
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Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...m to engage in household needs and some kind of a sport. In my view, engaging in homely a...
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Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...e in extra-curricular activites or some kind of a sport to keep them busy and keep their ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...rom all the junk, that leads to obesity.In this way, a balanced diet will enable h...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ruggle with losing weight. She tried so many different kinds of diets throughout her life. The...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to get some form of exercise every day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, well, as to, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60898876404 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66094365474 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548314606742 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4338178419 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2272727273 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2272727273 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137832694655 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464473879911 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065959564728 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103981861987 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474954867183 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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