Your local government has recently received an investment. They should allocate this investment to: a-building a library b-building a public pool c-buillding a public park?
The investment we got is exceedingly substantial, and thus, we have to utilize it effectively. From my point of view, the best option is certainly building a public library. I uphold this statement for three core reasons, which I will elucidate in the following essay in depth.
First and foremost, our country has got a shortage of libraries, and consequently building a library would undoubtedly reduce this shortage. Based on my own subjective experience, it is overly arduous to find books in English, and books are pivotal for learning English. Last time, I was seeking for Carlo Rovelli’s book, which is quite promulgated in other countries, and I could only find one in a book store, yet the price book store demanded for this book is relatively expensive, so I wasn't able to read a book, which is too inexpensive and prominent abroad. To this end, library is necessary for our country, not to mention society.
Secondly, books are integral part of education, so having a new library would be also very effective in terms of attaining knowledge, as well as enhancing outlook. Even though books possess a myriad of boons, it became evident that poeple reading books in Azerbaijan are considerably few, so new library would be supportive in terms of encouraging people to read more books; moreover, people in our country dedicate their time to trivial activities such as drinking tea, or chatting with friend for a long time, so library would render people to refrain from this triffliing activities, and get more inclined to reading books in their spare time.
Thirdly, a public library entails an array of infromation concerning our history, culture and alike. Consequently, it would definitely capture attention of tourists, and make them acquainted with Azerbaijan’s history. For instance, my uncle, who lived a vast majority of his live in European countries, was complaining regarding lack of libraries in Azerbaijing; he was unceasingly accentuating how decent libraries does European counrties have, and besides, he also asserted that one of the prime reasons people from abroad visit these countries is due to their enormous and captivating libraries.
In conclusion, I would like to proclaim that while determining where to allocate investment, it is vital to consider making contribution to education for it is essential part of any country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19060052219 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01431253757 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597911227154 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.255189505 48.9658058833 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.923076923 100.406767564 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4615384615 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6153846154 5.45110844103 250% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115387333104 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518070364303 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481204944138 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672680630978 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281417670748 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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