In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example,
honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be
successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your
experience to explain your answer. When you write your answer, you are
not limited to the examples listed in the question
Intelligence is definitely the best characteristic that a person needs to have success in life.
Firstly, it helps people to overcome hindrances. For example, when facing a hard choice to make, a person ought to be able to take the right choice to succeed afterwords, otherwise it would not be able to return to restart again.
Secondly, intelligence provides support for students. For instance, when I was studying in the college, I did not need to study with my classmates after classes due to the fact that I was able to fathom the lessons properly. Therefore, I could have good grades in the tests and I did not have to redo the semester again.
Thirdly, intelligence gives a person the opportunity to not only make a lot of money but also it helps a person to help others. As an example, when a person is very intelligent, he knows the sort of work to do in order to make thousands of dollars. Then, he will succeed and have a good life. In addition, being intelligent can help the person to teach others. This will make others to seem alike him.
Finally, intelligence is the best quality for everybody.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in addition, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 1977.66487455 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 198.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62626262626 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77437808487 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 212.727598566 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 618.680645161 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8416362747 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 5.45110844103 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146651399101 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543451475243 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363410831501 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083769571173 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350375826269 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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