Your professor has assigned the class a final project. However, each student is free to choose who they will work with. If you had to work on this kind of project, would you rather:
-work alone
-work with a classmates
-work with a tutor
Project works are the inevitable part of student’s life. we have to submit tons of projects during our student life period. In the given scenario, It is said that whether it is better to do these assignment alone or in a group or with a tutor. What would I choose? Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that, If I were in that place then I would definitely opt to work with a tutor. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To start with, teachers are always great to work with as they have better understanding of anything and everything. To be more precise, they assist us to do our assignment in a fruitful way. For instance, when I was in college, I had some project to do for my finals and at that time I was in dilemma that I didn’t understand the task. Then, my class teacher helped me to finish it. Not only this, it went so well and I got A grade in that assignment. Indeed, with the support of teacher we can excel in everything and lead us towards our bright future.
Next, task can be done in peaceful environment. To be more clear, doing work with tutor is far better than doing it alone or with our friends. I have witnessed this in my own personal life. Again back in high school, I choose to complete my assignment with my friends. But instead of doing our homework we end up gossiping. Consequently, we got poor grade in that assignment. However, this won’t be the case with teacher. Therefore, it is very crucial to do our project in a environment where there is zero distraction
All this considered, when it comes to our study which hold our future, we need to be mindful about how to accomplish our task. As a matter of fact, doing it with our tutor is always welcoming because they are the source of our knowledge and can show to us the path of our bright and beautiful future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... the inevitable part of student’s life. we have to submit tons of projects during ...
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Line 2, column 191, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this assignment' or 'these assignments'?
Suggestion: this assignment; these assignments
...is said that whether it is better to do these assignment alone or in a group or with a tutor. Wh...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fruitful way" with adverb for "fruitful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...se, they assist us to do our assignment in a fruitful way. For instance, when I was in college, I...
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Line 4, column 473, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...it is very crucial to do our project in a environment where there is zero distrac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, i feel, as a matter of fact, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36994219653 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59229060815 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526011560694 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.588132822 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4761904762 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275488049898 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884590891306 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865900869654 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190496990088 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101349941578 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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