Your university is located in a community with a struggling economy. The school administration has decided to make it mandatory for each student to volunteer at least 40 hours per year to one of the town’s many volunteer programs. Do you agree or disagree with this policy?
It is claimed that schools' principals decided to provide their pupils with 40 hours or more mandatory volunteering when the city's economy had been challenging. There are many advantages and disadvantages of this decision, such as using students' human resources, do not providing a chance to deny this opportunity, and interacting with them to the local community. I am confident that the most valuable decision will be to provide the learners with options when it is possible. It is essential because volunteerism is an activity when people understand their intervention to the community and the significance of their free work in the education process.
Clearly, nobody can lead students to volunteer as a mandatory part of the curricular or extra-curricular activity when the economy has difficulties. At the same time, some students prefer to have many entertainments and fun during the school year other students struggling with education, part-time job, and volunteering. On the other hand, any volunteering projects should be for all pupils voluntarily because they should understand their substantial impact on their city or town programs.
Indeed, altruism and philanthropy are voluntary for all students. And this issue is not only about money but also about an imperative part of their lives and their community. In fact, the school administration should avoid any unpopular decision about 40 hours of required volunteering. Why is it important not to make this decision? The answer is plain to see: the department of school education should provide options for students where they could choose the best activities for them.
Nevertheless, volunteering is an excellent opportunity for all students to achieve their aspirations in their education and admission to the university or college. If pupils have the same marks and SAT exam results, the college admissions office will favor the student with volunteering experience and background. Along with that, volunteer hours are a valuable and robust option for all learners who want to achieve success. They could know more about their community, their problems in the economy, and their states' features.
In the final analysis, it appears that volunteering should be a voluntary decision of all people, mostly students from a middle and high school, and the school administration cannot suggest at least 40 hours of volunteers' activities per year for the town's needs. All in all, we found many advantages of this conclusion. This illustration understand that volunteerism is a voluntary action provides examples of why the school administration should inhibit this solution and realize the apparent advantage of volunteers' projects for all students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'understands'.
Suggestion: understands
...s of this conclusion. This illustration understand that volunteerism is a voluntary action...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, at least, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2298.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44549763033 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09802563796 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502369668246 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6465348152 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.947368421 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2105263158 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295616708529 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923795476597 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076485557462 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172443615564 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466045578946 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.002688172 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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